Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts

Monday, 27 March 2017

MA Week 62 - Etching, processes, crit… and London


Reflection on the past week, 27th March 2017

 
Printing and processes

Following on from last week’s blogpost, I updated my overall plan but decided I needed more tactical, day by day plans, to allow me to focus and get something done. I decided that I should work around being able to get into the Print Room on Friday. I wanted to restart etching but felt unsure about how to do so.

It’s amazing what a bit of thinking time can do. A few strands came together, somehow. A couple of weeks back I had a discussion with one of my fellow students about how my health difficulties impact on my ability to produce work. I seem to have intense phases of activity followed by days or weeks of inability to do anything, even blog. She said, “that’s your practice. Work with it”. This quite obvious piece of information came as both a revelation and a relief. Within creative practice there always seems to be a driver to do work on a grand scale. Realising that smaller pieces of work can also be valid suddenly opened up new ways of working.

Allied with this, I’d been reading and pondering upon a newspaper that I’d received at the MMU conference. The illustrated paper is by Howard Read, whom I’d met and talked with briefly, and it describes his visual and academic research into the gentrification of Elephant and Castle in London. The subject material was of obvious interest to me. Alongside considerations of the removal of social housing and the creeping gentrification, Howard had discussed in detail the purpose of sketching and drawing. Again, a real insight: not all drawings have to be finalised. Indeed many drawings should not be finalised as they are a contribution to a future, finalised piece. A sketch can be just that – a visual note, so to speak.

Original photo....
These two strands manifested themselves in a realisation that I didn’t need to rush anything; I could work on a smaller scale with a more robust process. I therefore got an A5 sketchbook and did a (reversed) sketch of one of the Mabgate photos. It isn’t perfect, but it is allowed to be like that. I also moved some things around in the composition to suit my purpose. I let myself enjoy the sketching rather than pressurising myself and it worked so much better. The following evening, I found the little copper plates that hadn’t worked in the Summer, and found I’d re-ground them. I freehand-etched the same image into one of them.

 
Etching based on photo

I hadn’t been in the print room for so long that I felt slightly nervous returning. By happy coincidence, Mike (the technician) had been doing some etching so had up-to-date experience of how long to bite the plates. I bit it for 29 minutes, inked it, printed it and… it worked! 7 x 4.5cm of wonderful scratchy black marks. I spent the rest of the session working with different papers (Canaletto and Zerkel) and different levels of polishing, to get used to using the copper. The plate’s previous biting (from the Summer) has left it pitted and this gives an interesting undertone, so this is possibly something to do more deliberately as I move on. I also sanded and inked another of the little plates from the Summer ready for the next piece.

 
Crit

The same day, five of us got together for a crit. I’d brought in the paintings I did for the MMU conference plus the Mabgate office print (see this week 51 blogpost) , but by this time I’d printed the little plate and had become quite immersed in that. Ignoring this, my classmates gave me plenty of input!
Details of "tiles" from work for MMU conference
 
Again, as at the conference, there was interest in the “tiles”. There was a suggestion to introduce colour into the tiles, or to try strips. They suggested using photocopies and copies onto acetate to help composition. Another wake-up call around process. I know this – so why haven’t I been doing it? It’s been the time pressure that I’ve put myself under, of course. There was a feeling that the map elements might be too literal an interpretation of the journey, and it was suggested I consider cropping some of the work – effectively using a little square viewfinder to find points of interest. This tied in with ideas I’d had to do a few smaller pieces – paintings, prints, drawings, photos –based on the Mabgate photographs. A really interesting idea was to take a “slice” of work – why does everything have to be square, or rectangular.  

I particularly like the idea of basing something on the “tiles” but using colour and using strips so this is a probable area for experimentation.


London

The next day, the same five of us went to London. I’ve written reflections about the galleries we visited in this London Galleries page. However, there is something more to relate. We were all feeling pretty tired at about 4.30pm outside our last gallery, the Drawing Room, and after some discussion set off to walk to Elephant & Castle tube station to get the tube back to King’s Cross. We hadn’t go far when by chance we saw a bus going to King’s Cross so we boarded. This meant a top-deck view of Elephant & Castle, including the very development that Howard Read had been recording. I’ve never been to Elephant & Castle before in my life. It was such a heavy coincidence that it intuitively confirmed to me that my approach of the past week was the correct direction at this point.

 
Visiting galleries is thirsty work

Monday, 8 February 2016

MA Week 16 - Crits


The taught session this week took the form of two crits. You had to take in some work, so I took the decomposed gasometer pictures (explained in this post) and some of the laser cuts of my face. I was nervous about sharing the work as I felt it was still at a very early stage. Each of us displayed our work as you might see it in a gallery.
 
Ready for critiquing!
 
 
Silent crit

We worked in a group of 4. Three participants observed and commented on the work of the other participant, who had to remain silent for about 10 minutes and then was able to respond and discuss for 5 minutes. I had expected it would be very difficult to keep quiet, but it was totally absorbing listening to the others’ comments.  I really enjoyed this exercise and I got lots out of it (and I hope the others in my group did, too).

Comments received:

Images form a series of 4, linked

(Three colour laser cut)

eyes lose detail as overlaid

Carry on with more of the same cut images

Make a circle with more of the same cut images

Carry out a journey in colour by using more of the same cut images in a rainbow of colours

(laser cut with gasometer image)

Selection of words on image appears deliberate

Depicts hidden or contained memory which now exists only inside your head

Self is natural ; gasometer is man-made

Image is very delicate. Try more layers to get depth.

Link between me and gasometer

(Decomposed gasometers)

Japanese sunburst above my image

Curiosity re how the images were produced

Relief; positive and negative

 
Fellow MA students, Sally and Ali, seeing the lighter side!
Socratic crit
 
Again we worked in a group of 4. In this style of crit, the artist can introduce their work and the group can discuss freely. I found this less useful because I was priming the other participants with my viewpoint, rather than letting them form their own opinions. 

Comments received

Try a monoprint of my face to lose some of the crispness and control

The laser cut lines look like wires or a circuit board

Use parts of face rather than whole face - make it more universal.

 
Reflection

Although my classmates are aware of my subject matter, so are hardly neutral judges, I was pleased with the way they picked up on what I was trying to depict, particularly in the silent crit.  It was interesting that there was a thought that the words on the gasometer image were deliberately chosen, as this wasn’t the case. But as they were from my own notebook, they were bound to relate to my interests, so they were not random either.  

The idea of carrying on with different colours for my laser cut image is an interesting one. It could produce an interesting extended effect. However, given the problems I’ve had with sticking down these cutouts, I would have to do this from card. One to consider, definitely.

Monoprinting is another technique to consider. I was actually watching a group doing it in the print room the other day and I liked the “sooty” effect they got around their lines. I’ll try this if I can make time. 

The most striking comment was about the gasometer laser cut depicting hidden or contained memory which now exists only inside my head. This really ties in with my current thinking about repurposing and re-imagining our memories, but it articulated it in very different words. It also resonates with the work I’ve done on the many views of ourselves that we present to the world.